Shawna,in case you are watching...this is the last version..we have made some changes to a few sequences, and also how the story ends...
Gals n guy... I think the 2nd time after she cuts herself, instead of looking up, feeling the 'flow'... we should have her looking as if she is hoping to see the rabbit again..a bit of despair that turns into ecstasy when she sees rabbit again...Opening needs to be slower...
Shawna,
ReplyDeletein case you are watching...
this is the last version..
we have made some changes to a few sequences, and also how the story ends...
Gals n guy...
ReplyDeleteI think the 2nd time after she cuts herself, instead of looking up, feeling the 'flow'... we should have her looking as if she is hoping to see the rabbit again..
a bit of despair that turns into ecstasy when she sees rabbit again...
Opening needs to be slower...