I think that the font that you choose does not really suit our story. You may need to research a bit. As for the layout, it is too ordinary. You can rotate the pictures or add borders or frames to it. I thought I ask for different designs. Where are the rest of the designs?
relax ky..haha.. i love the 1st page!!! so classic.. 2nd page.. hmm.. can be improve.. i'll pass u some nice images to frame the concept drawing (: nicenice^^ i like.
I think that the font that you choose does not really suit our story. You may need to research a bit. As for the layout, it is too ordinary. You can rotate the pictures or add borders or frames to it. I thought I ask for different designs. Where are the rest of the designs?
ReplyDeleterelax ky..haha.. i love the 1st page!!! so classic.. 2nd page.. hmm.. can be improve.. i'll pass u some nice images to frame the concept drawing (: nicenice^^ i like.
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